Wednesday, 9 September 2009

Lame.

Been awhile since I blogged. Don't know why, semangat patah langsung...

Hence this bad piece of poetry to vent out, continuing from the last post...

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All the beauties and pretties of this world
Have some sort of power to hold
So that anyone who behold
Will be struck out cold.

The entrance of a she
Is always nearly an excrescence.
In the beginning they were we,
In the end only defiance.

At first it was bliss
Coupled with laughs and shrieks.
Midway it turned into a hiss
And everyone evaded the tracks.

Quite easy to start,
Easier to fuck.
When it's all dark,
Both the lame duck.

5 comments:

Somebody said...

it's nice though, but the fuck word like destroy the whole poem, making an ugly end.
juz...comment ah...no hard feeling...

lucas said...

Quite easy to start,
Easier to fuck.
When it's all dark,
Both the lame duck

cool ending.. hahaha.. meaning is quite vague right? nothing emo?

Hua Sheng said...

Rachel : y dont u try to appreciate that word thru a more literatural point of view??

Thru words is the best way for readers to understand a poet's mind...xD....

JerryNg said...

infinity sad cases..
flirt is the starting,
sad is the ending.T.T

Niel said...

rachel: haha. i was feeling exactly cheerful while writing. =)

lucas: what ur doing here? lol...

huasheng: it depends~

jerry: the ending is always good, hey =__=